Fiction Based Argument
In all of these essays, we had to read the book ad identify a recurring image or theme emerging that could reflect society and how we interpret it. My best essay exemplifies my learning this year. If you look at my burro genius essay, you can see that I started to develop flow and really execute my ability on writing background information about the book. I also developed a way to connect my evidence to society's principles and really get into the "what does this mean". My example of growth is clear when you look at the Rain of Gold essay and the Oscar Wao essay. In the Rain of Gold essay you can see that my paragraph were really short and were not developed/ structured correctly. I didn't include background information about the book in the introduction or before the evidence is introduced. But after i progressed further in the year, the growth is clear. I did introduce background information and was able to achieve flow with my writing. I developed a theme in the Oscar Wao essay, that was used in class as an example introduction paragraph. I also learned about the 3 levels of thinking that allows me to elaborate my evidence in a bigger scale. There is always room for growth and in this case, its my awkward wording. Towards the end of my Oscar Wao essay, you can identify awkward wording that distracts my readers flow and make them not want to read it. I have acknowledge this mistake and I will concentrate my ability to fix that mistake in the future.