The Death Penalty Reflection |
The Death Penalty Essay |
In this essay we had to choose a side, whether the Death Penalty should be abolished. We needed to integrate evidence, elaboration and our own opinion. I was able to demonstrate that I could decide on a side of a controversial topic and write an essay. I started off by introducing a high number;evidence, to shock the audience. I then stated my claim and provided decisive evidence in the following paragraphs. I was able to restate my opinion. But, what I couldn't do in this essay is have clear sentences; I had awkward wording and bad grammar. I couldn't restate my opinion in the conclusion and didn't provide a clear hook for the introduction. If I were to do this again, I would change my sentences to make them clear and restate my thesis.
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Operation Varsity Blues Reflection |
Operation Varsity Blues Essay |
In this essay I had to take a topic and write an argumentative essay about whatever you want but had to be related to the case. This essay shows that I can set up a good introduction with a good thesis. This essay shows that I'm not able to write a efficient conclusion paragraph and not able to elaborate my evidence. If I could do this I would write my elaboration and cite my evidence more properly.
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College Athletes Reflection |
College Athletes Reflection |
In this essay I had to write an essay, choose an argument about the college athletes should/ shouldn't get paid. This essay demonstrates that I was able to write an essay about a topic and giving sufficient background about the topic. This essay proves that I couldn't have clear sentences and spell words and phrases correctly. If I could do this again, I would re-do my paragraphs to change the basic evidence and components. I would also go back and change my wording so it sounds less awkward
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Virtual Schools Reflection |
Virtual Schools Essay |
In this essay I had to take a stand on a topic that involves the virtual schools, and provide evidence to convince my point of view on the topic. This essay shows that I could introduce the essay with a good hook and transition into the thesis of my essay. This essay also shows that I can introduce the evidence correctly and cite it good. This essay shows that I couldn't include background information on the argument before my essay and didn't add background information before my evidence is introduced. This also shows that I couldn't do the 3 levels of analysis on my evidence and also I can't restate my opinion. If I were to do this again, I would restate my opinion and cite my evidence more clearly. I would also change any awkward wording so that my essay could have flow as the reader is reading through it.
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